Help please!

[mayahund]

Thanx to the efforts of Börge, my webmaster at; www.arivene.net/ I am now starting to translate Chili's homepage into english. You'll find it at; chili.arivene.net

Rome wasn't built in one day so this is going to take some time! I'm also starting a new (and real) job monday so my time schedule is a little bit tight at the moment but I'm doing my best;)

I could do with some help though from the englishspeaking community in here!

I would really appreciate if you guys would go have a look and tell me if I'm miss spelling or if I don't make sense!
To me it's important that I keep a high standard on my language while writing so all feedback is of great value.

Easiest way to give me feedback is to mail me privately and maybe "cut and paste" the text's that need changing and in what way. My mail is on the front page of the homepage.


Ewa

[temwani]

Hi Ewa,

I have read and your english is very good. I will email you the only two amendments that I would suggest.

Geri

[mayahund]

Thanks Geri!
I will await mail!

I also believe I was being unclear - The page I want help with is this one; chili.arivene.net

If you have a look at todays date you'll find that the girls got themselves a new job. From now on they have to work for their food

Ewa

[bulieboerboels]

Hi Ewa had a look at the above and also noticed two spelling mistakes.Will leave it a couple of days and if not altered will email you.Regards Paul.

[abel]

Hi Ewa !

your site is appreciated - nothing from me on your english ...
A new, REAL job ? - you're sure that's a good idea ? - any idea how much time a job takes ?

Well, congratulations on beeing empoyed ...

Cheers now,

Albert.